“You learn writing by writing.” I have so often heard this
phrase and as the days go by, I understand the truths underlying behind it. When
I wrote a first draft and completed it last year, it was futile to try and edit
it. I didn’t know where to start and how to proceed further. It was because I can
never write a book linearly, chronologically. I might be writing about how they
had broken up yesterday and then write about how they fell in love today. So,
at the end of the first draft, I had these massive bunch of pages that talk
about the various scenes in people’s lives. The point of view and voices might
change a lot between the scenes too. That’s why, short stories and poetry
pretty much fitted me easily. I could hardly wander much there. Even if I did
tend to, like the loyal sheep dog herding sheep, my pen would be herded by my
stoic left brain to get back into the fence.
Something changed this time around. I started thinking about
plotting and structure. My good bunch of NaNoWriMo friends told me plotting was
not so bad for a pantser like me. So, after writing about nearly half of the
first draft, I took a break to think. NaNoWriMo is just writing – just word
count – thinking is not permitted. For 2-3 days, as my WC backlogged, I mulled
over my story and then made some index cards. I wrote down a few lines about
each scene I had written. Then, I placed them into the three act structure and
marked the scenes pivotal to the hero’s journey. Quickly, I realised the scenes
that were missing. Along the way, a perfectly thrilling climax showed itself up
in my brain. I jotted it all down in more cards and placed them in their right
slots. Hey presto, I was holding a cohesive draft in my hand.
I am still a pantser. It was after writing some 25000 words
that I found out how the story ended. By the way, I have another early draft
done some years ago for which I could never find an ending. So, at times, I
shudder when I think what if I hadn’t found an end to this too. Then I remember
Stephen King’s advice to keep writing as the characters do have to come out
somewhere. Now, for the first time, I have an interconnected organised
consistent draft. It still needs tons of editing but that is another story
altogether.
Once this story is done, I am going back to those two
drafts. They were wonderful tales, close to my heart and I’m going to give it
my all to help them see the light of the day. Wish me luck!
Well written piece Archana and good luck with writing. Editing can come later. If we have the words, deleting and or rearranging should not be a problem. I think software like scrivener would help you organize all your scenes as it allows you to write any scene from the story and then it has a nice process to keep it organized. Do check it. I use it a lot. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Usha. I'm going to buy Scrivener. Hearing so much good about it. It's at 50% off for Nanowrimo winners. :)
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